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2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(二):社交人际书面表达           ★★★
2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(二):社交人际书面表达
作者:佚名 文章来源:网络 点击数: 更新时间:2018/4/27 9:29:11

写作专题二:社交人际
一、 与专题相关的话题项目:family, friends and people around, personal environments, interpersonal relationship
 
二、 与话题相关的知识准备:
1. 相关单元:七上 Unit 1 Making friends
七下 Unit 1 People around us
八下 unit 1 Helping those in need, unit 2 Body language
九上 Unit 3 Family life, Unit 4 Problems and advice
2. 相关词汇:be friendly to , make friends with sb, get on/get along well with sb, share happiness and sadness with sb, argue with, argument, be angry with, fair, housework, be responsible for, expect, concerned, generation gap, suggestion, sadness, self-control, apologize, neighborhood, lazy, duty, wash the dishes, counselor, bully, peaceful, guidance, fault, relationship, reliable, advise
3. 相关句型:
    It’s adj for sb to do sth
    It’s adj of sb to do sth
    You’d better (not) do sth
    You should/must/ can (not) do
    In my opinion/view
 
1我父母每个月都给我一笔数目可观的零用钱
.My parents give me a generous amount of pocket money every month.
2.我父母从来不为我做家务付费。
My parents never pay me for doing housework.
3.我对学习网球认真。
I was serious about learning tennis.
4他们说指望不劳而获是不好的。
They say it’s bad to expect things for nothing.
5.我对他们感到十分遗憾。
I feel sorry for them.
6.我有时会和Katie吵架,但她让我有一个可以倾诉的人。
I argue with Katie sometimes, but she gives me someone to talk to.
7被人欺负会让你觉得很孤独和生气,但你不是孤立无援的。
Being bullied can make you feel very lonely and angry, but you are not alone.
 
 
4. 相关语法:一般现在时,一般过去时, 情态动词
 
例题:
班里进行了中学生有必要干家务活的辩论。请根据以下两位同学的观点,为校报写一篇关于Should students do housework?的文章,可适当发挥,字数80字左右。(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数)
John
没有必要做家务。作业很多,父母也不让做家务,只要学习好就行……
Lily
应该要做家务。虽然作业多,但仍可挤出时间做简单的家务,如扫地,洗碗……
你的观点

 
Should students do housework?
   There is a debate on “should students do housework?” in our class. _____________________________________________________________________
解题思路:
1、 审题:
a. 本文共有 5 个要点
b. 时态主要采用 一般现在时
c. 主要人称是___三__, __一___ 两种人称
2、 列要点
John
没有必要做家务。It’s not necessary
作业很多(too much homework),父母也不让做家务( make sb (not) do,只要学习好就行 study hard and well
Lily
应该要做家务(should do housework)。虽然作业多,但仍可挤出(spare time)时间做简单的家务,如扫地,洗碗 (clean the floor, wash the dishes)
你的观点

可能用到的句型或连词:it’s adj. For sb to do, so…that ,because, for these reasons, therefore
 
3、 连词成句,连句成篇  
 
Should students do housework?
There is a debate on “should students do housework?” in our class. John think it’s not necessary to do housework because too much homework to do. Besides, many parents make children not do housework. In their opinions, study hard and well is everyghing. Lily has different idea. She thinks students should do housework. In her opinion, though we students have too  much homework , we can spare time to help parents do housework. We can clean the floor and wash the dishes. As for me, it’s our responsibility to do housework because we are the member of our family.
 
点评:
优点:本文用词基本准确,有适当的连词和较丰富的句型
缺点:本文有少数语法错误;文章的布局不是很清楚
 
4. 检查思路:
完成作文自查表:
1. 如果没有问题的,请在项目后打√。
2. 如果有问题,请在项目中圈出来,并在文中做出修改。
项目
 第一次自查
第二次自查
布局与内容要点
 √
 
人称 时态、主谓一致
 
 
动词搭配、介词搭配

 
拼写错误
 √
 
好词好句
 √
 
分项分档评分表
项目
要素
给分表
内容
6分
切合题意,体现要点
6-5.5
 
6
5—4.5
 
 
4-3.5
 
 
3-2.5
2
1.5
1
0
有所发挥
准确性
6分
语  法
6-5.5
5—4.5
 
4.5
4-3.5
 
 
 
3-2.5
2
1.5
1
0
词  汇
机械性:大小写,拼写和格式等错误
流畅性
3分
结构
3-2.5
2-1.5
  2
1
0.5
0
0
0
0
自评总分: 12.5
 
参考范文:
There is a debate on “should students do housework?” in our class. Different students have different opinions.
John thinks it’s not necessary for students to do housework because we have too much homework to do. Besides, many parents don’t ask their children to do housework. In their opinion, studying hard and well is everything. Lily has opposite idea. She thinks students should do housework. According to her,  though we have too much homework to do , we can spare time to help parents do some simple things such as cleaning the floor and washing the dishes.
I agree with Lily because we are part of our family, so it’s our responsibility to do the housework.
 
 
 
三 练习
最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(Don’t keep your worries) 的调查活动,请你用英语写一篇短文。
                                2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(二)社交人际
要求:1) 内容包括:调查结果(如图所示)
2)对老师和父母的建议
3)字数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名

     Our school has made a survey---“Don’t keep your worries.” ______________________________
1. 审题:
本文共有    个要点
时态主要采用           
人称是_________
2. 抓要点(写在要点旁边)
3. 可能用到的句型或连词
________________________________________________________________________
4. 连词成句,连句成文:
 ________________________________________________________________________
 

5、完成作文自查表:
如果没有问题的,请在项目后打√。如果有问题,请在项目中圈出来,并在文中做出修改。
项目
 第一次自查
第二次自查
布局与内容要点
 
 
人称 时态、主谓一致
 
 
动词搭配、介词搭配
 
 
拼写错误
 
 
好词好句
 
 
 
参考例文:
Our school has made a survey---Don’t keep your worries. Here are the results.
About 50%of the students in our school are worried about their homework. They have so much homework to do every day that they feel stressed too much. About 30%of the students think their parents are too strict with them in their studies. They think the only thing their parents care for is study so it’s difficult for them to communicate with their parents. The other 20% of them say they are weak in health. They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities.
According to the survey we know that we students have too much stress .Both teachers and parents should give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves because we want to take more exercise to keep fit. We will do our best and we also want to play on our own.



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